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Writer's pictureNichol DeCastra

Chasing His Bunny by Golden Angel

I found the plot interesting, but I couldn’t get into the story itself. The story is about Bethany and her siblings being rescued from the lab they spent most of their childhoods in and her finding out she is the fated mate of one of her rescuers, Steele. Steele is a wolf shifter while Bethany is a giant ass bunny (her form)/bear (thus the giant part)/turtle (the skin under her fur is a shell). Throughout most of the book, if not all, Bethany refers to Steele by nicknames like Mr. Hot and Controlling or something. It got real annoying real quick. I also had a hard time buying the chemistry between Bethany and Steele. Largely because, for the most part, Bethany was more worried about her little sister, Bailey.


Bethany and Steele eventually have a dinner date, which Bethany only goes to because she wants to get laid. She does this despite knowing that Steele is convinced she is his fated mate and she thinks its a ton of crap. This is largely because she is knew to the shifter community because the bad guys, The Company, and experimented on by Dr. Montgomery, who pulled their shifter genes out and made them into shifters captured her, since they were children. So, I wish the plot had focused more on Bethany and her siblings, she has three brothers along with her sister, getting used to being shifters and learning more about their community instead of skimming over it. I think having Steele help Bethany and her siblings get used to their new community would have been good in helping Steele and Bethany get together. Instead it goes from having sex and dinner to checking on Baily and then to the community getting attacked by The Company to oh wow we are really fated mates to happily ever after. I just wish there was more emphasis on Steele and Bethany’s relationship.


So I give it a three out of five stars.


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